Henry's Very Normal Fun Amazing Pinball Machine!!!!!!!!!

This is so creative! I don’t think I’ve ever experienced metanarrative pinball before. It reminded me of The Beginner’s Guide. I really enjoyed it. I was gonna say that my only critique is that at a certain point I wanted to just lose on purpose to advance the narrative, but then you rolled that into the narrative, so kudos to you! Great job!

Good idea for adding dialogue

I loved the narrative in the game :D very entertaining  and really adds to the player experience quite uniquely

Very funny dialogues, make me wanna proceed instead of playing pinball

Interesting progress and sound effects! Though I try to kill myself instead of playing the game to proceed :)

The theme of slowing building up your world while breaking the 4th wall is really consistent and it ended up making me play this game for a while :,)
The design layouts are really cool and fun to play, good job :D

that build up is crazy

so creative